The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/14
I liked it. It made me want to take my grandchildren there.
11/13/14
Warm, descriptive account of what must be a wonderful theme park for families. Great writing.
11/15/14
Lovely descriptive piece!

God bless~
11/19/14
It didn't take me long to realize that the enchanting story you penned pales in comparison to the awestruck wonder that occurs when reading to a young child, especially in your mature years. I got it right away and I was jealous of the way you got it. You were able to put it on paper so life-like that my own child-like imagination almost got away from me. Without a doubt there is a very blessed little one who reciprocates your love for reading. And I love your writing. Well done. I wouldn't change a thing.
11/20/14
Congrats!

You have a magical and special way of writing. Great work.

God bless~
Yea, Vonnie--great entry!