The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/14
I'm so glad the mouse escaped! Great job with this, "cat and mouse" tale.

I loved it, and the ending!

God bless~
11/01/14
Your vivid descriptions kept the suspense going right to the ending. Great job!
I loved this take on the topic, I thought it was really clever and original. The descriptions were so beautifully done, you could imagine the scene. I'm glad the mouse got away!
11/04/14
Great build up to the final escape, which I'm sure your MC (Mouse Character) bragged about musically later on as just another case of "Mice and easy does it." A A brilliant, though quite deliberately mouse-leading tail.
Loved it all the way through.
Well written and certainly suspenseful--until the surprise ending, anyway! I enjoyed this.
Chilled, thrilled and I am putty in your words - excellent!
Hugs, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
11/06/14
Congrats!

God bless~
11/06/14
Great descriptions through out the story.
11/06/14
Such a creative take on the topic! I had no clue that was where it was going until close to the end. Then I went back and read it again to savor from that low-to-the-ground perspective. Enjoyed this! Congratulations!