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10/16/14
In defence of testosterone - real or potential - I find it hard to imagine any boy behaving like this. But you have led us through a downward slide of warm misadventure. And your last line drove it home beautifully.
I can easily imagine it - all through this piece I was thinking about my younger son and how this would be exactly the sort of thing he could get up to. Thank you for sharing.
10/18/14
Oh man...I was laughing so hard all the way through. "A page from her notebook becomes a map (if you don’t look at the numbers on the back.)" just about put me on the floor.
10/18/14
I think I will be reading this a few more times. I will be learning from you very well done.
10/18/14
I really enjoyed this story which was enhanced by the style in which you wrote, in the present tense, no names used. Great writing!
10/19/14
This was so good! I am certain so many will relate to this story, children or otherwise.

Wonderful job of keeping my attention throughout the entire piece, and superb writing.

Thanks!

God bless~
10/20/14
What a fun piece! I grew up on a farm and this kind of adventure could easily happen. Thanks for the fun spirited story of childhood adventures lived well.