The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/14
What a hilarious story. I love Gramma Hillard and I love the characters you've created, each with their own distinctive flavor.

This story flowed well and the dialogue was perfect - and it made me smile and laugh throughout. I'm sure this will be one of my favorites this week.

Great job!
08/28/14
Brilliant! Loved everything about it; the bifocals on the tomatoes, the crumbling bicep, the image of the men outside the apartment. I love Granny Hillard, and I suspect they might stay in touch . . . ! Well done on a magnificent entry. Blessings, Helen
08/28/14
Hahahaha! Great job with this entire piece that had me laughing and wanting more.

Fantastic entry and will be noticed and remembered by many.

God bless~
A fun read for sure. Well done.
08/29/14
You've woven so many loose ends together in this cameo that I can see it expanded into a sitcom series. Your characters are so succinctly drawn, and the confusion so relentless, that you should rate way up there this week. But I for one want to know more about this cute and sharp li'l old lady.
I loved the wonderful descriptions in this and the vivid characters I could so easily visualise. Creative and funny story too. Great writing.
Pure delight!
Congratulations on ranking 14th overall!