The Official Writing Challenge
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I would have liked to see about a thousand more words to this story. I'd love to see how this young couple lives out the interesting set of stages you've set before us in this piece. thoght-provoking, especially in today's culture of anything goes. Always good to bring things back to basics. Thanks!
Awww. Although short in length, powerfully solid and endless on meaning! I loved this unique and trutful approach to this weeks topic.

God Bless~
Creative use of the topic.

Very informative and interesting.
Clever, concise and constructive material. I concur with the desire for more words, and maybe each word could be a chapter heading for a book called "Ships" in the Night:-( (and the Day,)
Loved this!

God bless~