The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/14
An engaging and well written piece with lots of detail,but I'm not sure I got it. In the end I decided it was pre-marital nerves concerning the couple's different personalities, or culture, and wondering if they could make it work. I kept looking for a hidden agenda, like was she overly attached to her laptop or similar. Maybe that was your intention, in which case it was skilfully done. (Or maybe I'm just plain dumb and need everything spelling out to me.) Either way, I enjoyed the ride. Great job!
08/16/14
I too had just a bit of difficulty grasping the meaning here. But the writing is good and I enjoyed the read. All the best!
08/18/14
Wonderful job this introspective piece. Great wording along the way that held my attention and focus on the MC.

A sophisticated piece of writing that leaves the reader pensive and pondering. Good job.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall!