The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this. You brought the character to life. I love his attitude and never give up point of view. I could picture the little boy working so hard. This is a great take on the topic too.
08/09/14
Awww...This was a really good story...well done!

God Bless~
I really like this piece. Can sense the love, the respect for the young man's finding his way, his truth, and the patience and encouragement (and pride) of parents.
08/12/14
Well chosen title!

Loved this story and would like to know how it ultimately ended. Very well done!
Delightful and sweet. I enjoyed immensely.
08/12/14
Well written account of the challenges and blessings of parenting.

So patient and encouraging.

Many good lessons from this story.

Great job.

08/13/14
Yes I'd say your son gave you perfect inspiration this week for a splendid story.
08/13/14
Ah, that was a clever take on the topic!

I can identify with the struggle you portrayed, of trying to find one's way.
08/14/14
Enjoyable story and great for the topic. Congratulations on your EC win.
Well deserved!
Hugs! Congratulations!
08/15/14
Congrats!

God bless~