The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet love story. You did a nice job of developing the MC. I felt like I knew her. Though the ending was a bit predictable, it was still sweet and nice to read a happily-ever-after story.
08/09/14
Sweet and happy ending! My kind of story. Well done.

God bless~
08/12/14
I wish more marriage/divorces ended this way.

Great story.

I agree that the ending was too predictable.

I would have written that he got in a car wreck, on life support, and as she rushes to the hospital she is in a wreck and they end up in the same room. Ha!

Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 17 overall! Happy Dance!