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08/08/14
I've watched special programs where conjoined twins have been separated. The faith of the parents gave them the strength to have the babies--and of course their lives were in God's hands all along. I found this entry interesting and on topic.
08/09/14
Informative, jarring, and emotional piece. Well done.

God bless~
This is a fresh take on the topic. I think you did a nice job of pulling out the suspense.
08/12/14
Very compelling and interesting.

Some hard choices.

One thing I would have liked to have seen, and of course these are just my thoughts, was an enticing opening.

Right after the "Oh, oh!" I would have expected a heart stopping, devastated reaction and response.


Just my opinion.

Great story.

God bless.
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