The Official Writing Challenge
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Your well written story illustrates your message perfectly.
08/02/14
I really enjoyed this well thought out tale! Well done, well written with a great message!

God bless~
08/04/14
I was out of breath at the end of this story. I loved it. Well written.

I don't feel qualified to critique your writing, but I was wondering about some of the sentences that could be combined into one paragraph.

Good job.

God bless.
08/08/14
Congrats!
God BLess~
08/11/14
Nicely written account and lesson of how our agendas can get in the way of walking like Jesus.