The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an absolutely marvelous poem--a delight to read.
I love the unexpected turn at the end. A wonderful poem that sings on in the imagination even after the last line.
08/02/14
I really loved this!
Well done.

God bless~
08/02/14
Great poem with an interesting mystery. Very well written and a joy to read.
08/08/14
Congrats! Greatjob! I loved this.

God BLess~
08/11/14
Nicely written and a unique story poem.