The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/14
Great job with the topic in this well written entertaining story...along with a message.


God bless~
Beautiful. The emotions are palpable, very moving. Thank you for a delightful read . . .
08/06/14
This was an adorable tale. Especially for us grandparents who have to travel a bit to pick up or visit precious cargo!
One slight red ink mark-
You wrote "The engine, I mean. Of my car." - it seemed awkward.
Congratulations on ranking 17 overall! Happy Dance!