The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful story, and so well written. Thank you.
08/02/14
Sweet and endearing story!

God bless~
I would read the entire story if you post it. This taste is heartbreaking and far too real . . .
08/04/14
Sad to the extreme. Haunting. And I want to know what happened to the little girl.
08/06/14
Your story reminds me of a favorite scripture "beauty instead of ashes."
Nicely written entry.
08/08/14
Congrats!
God BLess~
08/09/14
Congratulations, Ann, on your second place win. Your story is beautifully and realistically written. It gripped me from start to finish. I would like to know what happened next. Are you planning a sequel, or to expand the story into a novel? I would definitely read it!
08/10/14
I agree--this could be made into a novel. Your detailed descriptions are beautiful, pulling me right into the scene. I love the ending as a short story, but would also want to read more. Excellent job. Congratulations!
08/10/14
Congratulations!
Very powerful story, well-deserving of the win. I would have liked a little stronger sense of place and setting sooner in the story, but otherwise this was nearly perfect.