The Official Writing Challenge
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A thoroughly enjoyable read. Well done.
What an enthralling tale! I loved the setting and the dialogue. Perhaps you could have created a break and then concluded with dialogue between the the keeper of the paper and the one who could explain the Word to make the story even more powerful. This really was a fun read!
It would be interesting to see dialogue from Cai Lun's daughter. Perhaps the word restriction interfered? I think this well-written story has the makings of a full-length novel. The stateliness and pacing of your writing lends itself well to the setting. One thing I noticed that probably isn't needed is repeating your title within the body of the story.
07/25/14
Great story telling here. Well written and enjoyable piece.

God bless~
Congratulations on EC for a well-told story.
08/04/14
You always manage to approach the weekly topics from interesting and enlightening world perspectives.

I appreciate that!