The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I can feel your pain and I sense that God wanted you to write this so you will remember how he loves you the next time the grief overwhelms you. I also know you touched my heart and will touch countless others with your willingness to be transparent. Normally, I might urge you to do more showing by using dialog earlier in the story, but I see this as such a therapeutic piece that it and little things like the apostrophe in Christians don't matter. You did a nice job with this and I pray God continues to heal your heart.
"Jesus knows our every weakness." He can heal our hidden illnesses. Thank you for this story of His power.
Powerful, moving, touching piece. I thank you for the journals of your mind and heart in this well written poignant personal story.

I pray the Lord continues to hold you, guide you, touch you and heal you as you go forward with the next leg of your journey.

God bless~