The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/14
Love it! A simply engaging story.
07/18/14
You have told this gripping story extremely well and painting the character of your MC very well indeed. He and the story are very believable. This could easily be a winner!
07/18/14
Loved the slow pace of this tale.
This is an example of great story telling with vivid details bringing it to life.
07/22/14
Great script for a movie.

It is a good example of someone really looking at the simplicity in Christ and how worldliness could clutter up one's life.

I am so thankful that God has supplied me with so many blessings. I pray every day that nothing will ever be more important than Him.

God bless.
You did a brilliant job of building a great character. I found myself totally invested and enjoyed the ending. You did a great job with a fresh take on the topic.
07/22/14
Creative and special.

Well done.

God bless~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
07/24/14
Many congratulations on your win for this excellent story.
07/24/14
I love all the little details. Superb writing. Congratulations on your worthy win!
07/24/14
Very well done! Congratulations on your win!
07/24/14
Congratulations. Wonderful story.
07/24/14
This story rings true. Working with homeless men over the last decade, I've come into contact with your MC's internal dilemma quite often. Many of them are content to live a carefree, responsibility free life. And money has a tendency to bring responsibility. Your ending was brilliant, and also gives the reader a peek into the camaraderie between homeless people as well as their charitable nature. I find them to be more charitable than many rich people.

Well earned win! Congrats!
07/24/14
Congrats!

God bless~
07/24/14
Your MC's struggle was tangible and made your story so poignant and believable. Well done and congratulations!
07/25/14
Congratulations, Ann, on this winning entry. I thought it might be a winner and I was right! It's a very well deserved win.