The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/14
Wow - powerful!

God bless~
06/03/14
Absolutely beautiful and heartwarming and tearjerking and moving. Wow. Could go on and on. Hope this does well. :)
Ooh, what a wonderful story. I was expecting a twist, but it wasn't that. Your ending was perfect and gave me goosebumps and made me stop and think. Congratulations on ranking 16th overall. Happy Dance!