The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/14
Always amazed at the complexity of your poems, so good and could easily stand up to the literary giants!

Beautiful, as always.

God bless~
06/01/14
I read this the other day on my mobile and couldn't comment at the time (I'm all thumbs when it comes to typing on my phone); but I really wanted to.

This is the strangest little piece for me. It is so wonderfully complex, and yet so simple at the same time. People who can do this with words truly astound me. I would expect to see this in one of my daughter's textbooks as an example of this type of poetry...sorry I don't know enough to tell you what that is, but the meter here is really tight and the whole things flows effortlessly.

Awesome job!
06/01/14
Wowee. If I could write poetry like this! This is the kind of writing I aspire to.

This is none less than gorgeous. I don't know what else to say, except it left me with peace in my heart and lifted my spirits.

Blessings, Lynn
Exquisite.
06/01/14
Absolutely lovely, unique, beautiful poem!
06/01/14
You made me rethink the first lines from 'Trees' by Joyce Kilmer.

"I THINK that I shall never see
A poem lovely as a tree"

I think I just came very close.

Blessings.
06/01/14
Absolutely beautiful! I'm not very good with poetry, but I find a stellar feeling of soaring within your verses. The rhythm is spot on and rhymes crisp and unforced. Thank you for the inspiration!
06/02/14
Brilliant for its economy of language, while conveying such warmth and depth.
I particularly liked your very creative approach to this topic.
06/04/14
May you know the peace and joy of your quest.
06/05/14
I knew this one would finish highly this week. Great job and congratulations!
06/05/14
Not a surprise to see you here Virginia!

Congratulations on such a beautiful and inspiring poem!

God bless~
06/05/14
Creative with excellent construction! Congratulations!
06/05/14
Beautiful, Virginia! Congratulations and God bless!
06/06/14
I'd love to sit on your shoulder and watch you construct such a masterpiece. This puts the AWE in awesome.
Unusual and thought provoking topic. I loved this entry so much. So well written and inspiring. congratulations
06/08/14
I enjoyed reading this again, having more time to slow down and appreciate the beauty in this poem. It flows perfectly with lovely imagery and metaphors. Great job with this creative entry. Congratulations!
06/11/14
Brilliant and creative way to approach this topic.

I thoroughly enjoyed all its wonderful nuances.

Thank you for sharing your masterful way with prose.
06/11/14
Brilliant and creative way to approach this topic.

I thoroughly enjoyed all its wonderful nuances.

Thank you for sharing your masterful way with prose.