The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
This was breathtaking!
Great job!

God bless~
05/24/14
Your story brought tears to my eyes. I could so clearly see and hear heaven, Jesus, you and Satan. You captured emotions well also. Good writing.
Awesome message here!
Very moving and so identifiable. My heart is beating to the same rhythm - thank you for expressing it.
05/27/14
Ummm...

Wow!

That about covers it.
05/27/14
Okay...that doesn't completely cover it. Your superb writing deserves more than that.

I was mesmerized by this entry from beginning to end. Your writing put me in the MC's shoes better than any movie ever could. I felt the shame, the joy the relief and the worship oozing from every word and moment in this piece.

Awesome job!
05/29/14
Maybe we need another category. Fiction, non-fiction and future-fact.

My red ink is that I feel this story has been told very often and perhaps it will not score well in originality and uniqueness.

Doesn't change the fact that this is superb writing and tells the future well.

Blessings.
Congratulations on ranking 13 overall!