The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a fun and most enjoyable read!

God bless~
The title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed. I loved the repetition in the dialogue with the grandmother. It built the momentum of the story well. And, you wrapped it up with perfect ending. Well done!
I'm glad that Marty was able to stand up for himself, even if it wasn't standing up to Mike, but deciding to do what was right. I also liked the little touches of spanish in this piece.