The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/14
My favorite stanza has to do with the hairstyles, from the bird's nests to the banty rooster (LOL) to just waking up from sleep. I've seen all of those. In our "anything goes" society, we DO quite often end up with omnishambles. I enjoyed your "fashion parade" here! <3
05/10/14
Oh I loved this! Totally loved it. Coming from a generation that only wore flip-flop shoes on a beach or in the "school gym showers" I especially smiled at that reference!

Great job. I know this will be in the top ten.

God bless~
I enjoyed this. You have a great sardonic sense of humor. You created a picture for me and tackled the topic in a fresh and creative way.
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall!
05/17/14
Ugh! I agree one hundred percent. Great poem,Verna!