The Official Writing Challenge
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I can't remember a challenge piece I have enjoyed more than this one. The humor in this is priceless--every word a winner!
05/10/14
Hahahaha! This was really a cute story. I enjoyed it!

God bless~
05/12/14
This is fantastic. Wonderful story, incredible descriptions and amazing pictures for the mind's eye! I am still giggling - never again, shall I be afraid to give up the goo!!
05/13/14
Great story! My mind's eye could see it clearly. It left a good taste in my mouth. Isn't that what writing is all about? I look forward to reading more of your work.
This is brilliant. I love the daring nature of the husband. The ending was perfect and I can imagine both husbands and wives nodding their heads each understanding one point of view.
05/15/14
A really entertaining read! Great descriptive writing. One can just picture it. I love the humor.
05/15/14
Congrats, congrats Beth. This is SO well deserved. A brilliant entry that is still making me laugh! As always, wonderful writing.
Congratulations for EC. It's still BOB for me!
05/15/14
Congrats!

God bless~
05/15/14
What a well-intentioned action:) Fun fun story, Beth! A well-earned EC, for sure. You are way funny:)
05/15/14
SO FUNNY! Loved every word. A well deserved win. Congrats!!!
Congratulations!! I just read this out loud to my grind so we could get the definition of Omnishambles.
I meant to say my friend. This was so creative and colorful!
05/15/14
Ah, Beth, my dear, sweet friend! How I love this -- being the wife of a painter, I could chuckle and nod all the way through this. Excellent job! Congratulations! God bless!
05/16/14
I loved reading this! You are a talented writer and so funny! Your ending was perfect for this. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Crazy and colorful! I like!

Congratulations!
Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
05/16/14
Beth, congrats on your EC win with this creative, fun and entertaining tale. You had me smiling from the start and feeling sorry for the husband when things played out so differently than what he'd imagined. You truly are a gifted writer!
05/16/14
This is priceless. Every bit of it left me with a smile.Poor guy! A very well deserved EC. Congratulations!
05/17/14
Congratulations, Bethy. What a fun story! I could see it all.
05/20/14
Hilarious! I'm in the midst of several painting projects gone awry so your story had me grinning from ear to ear.

A well written and a truly believable self dialogue from your MC.

Congratulations on your win.