The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/14
Well written, and wondreful anaylsis of Old Testament alongside the hypocrisy that exists in the world today.

God bless~
05/13/14
I love the term "lint police" (may have to use that myself). Your entry excellently portrays how religion and laws enslave. Super writing!
This is a nice devotion. You did a nice job of relating today's world with the way the Parisienne behaved. It's a sad thing indeed. Remember not to start a sentence with a numeral, either write it out or tweak it so the number isn't in the beginning. Ex:There were 613 regulations that the Jets were to follow. Overall, you did a great job. Your message is one we all need to be reminded of from time to time, especially today when it seems people are motivated by the wrong things all the time.
Congratulations on ranking 13 overall!