The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/14
You sure have a way with dialogue, and atmosphere. What a fun, genuine, engaging read. Loved the relationships among the men. Felt very real.
05/02/14
Wonderful dialogue and cute story line with the teenager losing his music. Noticed a few typos and, may be a personal preference, but I found using the same names a bit confusing. A great read. Well done!
05/02/14
Really enjoyed the characters here. Not sure if I liked the double name thing, but well crafted.
05/02/14
This was fun. It made me wish I was part of the Macklin family. Wonderful writing!
05/04/14
A delightful romp and fun read!

God bless~
05/07/14
Cute story and dialogue! Especially liked Gramps the best!