The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/14
I really enjoyed this well written story in content and delivery.

God bless~
04/26/14
I really enjoyed the two characters you created here. This was a great read and your pace and dialogue were perfect.

Great job!
04/27/14
You've done well at creating believable characters in this story. Well done!
04/28/14
I liked the characters you created and the simple message that comes across loud and clear. Loved the gentle nature and wisdom of Leonie.