The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/14
Great job!

I loved the last line! : )

God bless~
04/26/14
This had a very nice flow to it and you did an excellent job of bringing your main character to life for me, as well as making your main point, which was spot on topic.

Nice job!
04/27/14
A great poem on this topic. You've brought up quite a few of our first world "problems" that bother us, the pampered. Well done!
04/28/14
It seems the common thread running through most of the entries is that people have too much of what they don't need and not enough of what they do. I enjoyed this poem which perfectly tied in with the topic.