The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/14
Wow! Not only were you on topic but you showed us a powerful truth without preaching it. Vivid descriptions and action. Well done.
04/18/14
What a scene you created with such detail and mood! Your story is so creative and beautifully written with a great message.
04/19/14
Truth in fiction in an astounding example of reality!

A friend of mine always refers to the computer as the "devil's playground." I'm going to let her read this one, she'll no doubt appreciate it as much as I did!

Sheer brilliance! Well done.

God bless~
I love the way you use words. I wish I had just 10% of the vocabulary you have! I re-read the article 3 times, and it became better with each reading. It is a powerful message through and through, and I plan to read it again! You are an excellent Wordsmith that makes the Lord smile with each article you write.

God Bless!
04/24/14
Congrats! God bless~
I knew you would do well with this article! Maybe one day I can be half as good as you are! Keep the great articles coming!

God Bless!
04/25/14
Yeah, Tracy! You did it again. Very creative approach to the topic. Well deserved! :-)