The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/14
Such an interesting read, I was pulled in from the very first paragraph. Excellent writing here.

God bless~
04/19/14
Your opening paragraph was filled with such descriptive words and phrases that I was able to picture your MC perfectly. With one sentence you clued the reader in on the compassionate heart of the waitress. And I loved how the MC felt drawn to Jesus when she encountered the gentleman with the kind eyes. I enjoyed this completely.
04/24/14
Congrats! God bless~
04/24/14
Oh, I love this, Pauline. Congratulations and God bless!
04/25/14
Congratulations on your editor's choice ! This is very well written and a creative idea. A fun entry to read.
04/26/14
Congratulations Pauline on your EC. It's well deserved for this lovely story about Mr Google. Very on topic and well written.