The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/14
Sounds like one of those reality television shows I see on commercials! Superbly written. Loved the ending.

God bless~
04/16/14
I liked this. Good story. Thank you.
I love a good allegory. You really did a wonderful job of creating the disharmony between the couple. You also had me giggling and blushing at some recognition of myself. Nicely done. Congratulations on ranking 20 overall. Happy Dance!!