The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/14
Wow - this was fabulous story in all aspects, message, delivery, and theme.

God bless~
04/16/14
This was very good. Wonderful message. Thank you.
You do such a wonderful job of capturing "church ladies" who seem like they are only there to gossip. You had me eagerly reading each word. The word pastor shouldn't be capped unless it is being used as a name. If you have the or my in front then it's just a common noun, not a proper one. Your ending was perfect. Often that can be the hardest part to write, but you nailed it. The picture you painted was a masterpiece--seriously I could see it in a gilded frame. Outstanding job. Congratulations on ranking 19 overall. Happy Dance!!