The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/14
I enjoyed this very much. You did a fabulous job showing how one's heart effects what one hears. I felt the tension, sadness, and joy equally. Great work.
03/18/14
You portrayed these sisters realistically. Each ones thoughts made complete sense and got me thinking along both sides of the debate. I love your ending. Super work!
03/19/14
This is a great take on the topic and you capture well what it might have been like for a contemporary follower of Jesus. Great writing!
Just one 'red ink' comment: perhaps it would have been better to use 'synagogue' instead of 'church' in this sentence, to fit the era of the story: 'Do you want to be cast out of your church?'
Congratulations for ranking 21 overall! Happy Dance!!