The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/14
I loved the contrast between both groups in the diner. And, being just a bit of a feminist, I was excited when the girls finally had a real breakfast.

Your story is so filled with accurate and believable humanity. Well done.
03/18/14
I completely enjoyed their stories (and was a bit fearful for them at the same time). Your writing skills are very good, I wanted to keep reading to find out what would happen next. This is great!
03/20/14
Simply marvelous. Congrats on the EC win.

God bless~
03/20/14
Great job. You packed a lot into one amazing story. Congrats on your EC.
03/20/14
Congratulations on Editor's Choice 4th place. Quite an accomplishment.
03/20/14
Congratulations on Highly Commended
03/23/14
Yay and goody! I am thrilled to see you in the Challenge.

I enjoyed your interesting and believable secret tryst with the MC and diner's patrons.

Congratulations on your EC placing.
04/03/14
Congrats!
God Bless~