The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/14
How comforting are these words:
"But we of the Gatherer’s fields are safe in the “barn,” while we patiently wait for the Lord of the harvest"

As always, you have painted a masterpiece with your descriptions. This just warms my heart to read from beginning to end. Excellent!

03/08/14
Oddly enough, I think my favorite part was the reference concerning skyrocketing prices. Never would've put those two together.

This was violent without going overboard, and honest without being preachy. Great work as always.
03/08/14
I enjoyed the poetic feel of this piece. I was taken in by the beauty, power, and intensity. Very well done.
Exquisitely phrased. . .
03/09/14
I never thought of myself as a seed, planted by God. You have told the story so well from planting to harvest. Your scripture verse at the beginning helped me to picture the whole thing. Very well done! Vonnie
This was an excellent analogy, and I was drawn in by the poetic descriptions.
03/11/14
Beautiful!

God bless~
03/11/14
This was beautiful and so poetic in description! Excellent read! Blessings!
03/12/14
Your imagery was beautiful rolling through my mind.
03/13/14
Congratulations on your HC and EC, a feat hard to do in Masters. Very well deserved. Blessings!
03/13/14
Congrats! God bless~
Whoo--Hoo Two ECs (at least) in a row! Happy Dance!
03/14/14
Congratulations!