The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/14
I'm thoroughly impressed with the poets on FW. It takes such time and effort and trial and error to make the story fit the confines of rhyme and meter.

All that to say... great poem! I love the line "It fascinates the insecure." Brilliant.
03/10/14
Masterfully crafted, with wonderful imagery. I love the second-to-last stanza especially. Thanks for sharing!
03/11/14
Poetic!

God bless~
03/13/14
Congrats! God bless~
03/14/14
I'm so glad you got an EC! Congratulations!
03/19/14
Though I don't know much about the various poetry forms as yet, I really enjoy this one. (So much to learn so little time) But it is writers like you that have inspired me to try. This is a very thought provoking piece, which never fails to draw me in.

My favorite part:
"Minds that dwell on rash conjectures
Are prone to not receive the true
They’ve been fed perverted Scriptures
By lucre-led who misconstrue
To elevate their point of view."
I think it was the witty use of "lucre-led" that really struck me most. Thank you for the inspiration and congrats on the EC!