The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/14
Sure had me guessing what it was she wanted to do! Heart touching story, well done!
03/06/14
This was a heartwarming, suspenseful read. It made me think of my 73 year old mother who beat lung cancer 5 years ago. On her last vacation she went zip lining. :)

Thanks for the story.
03/09/14
I really enjoyed the suspense and emotion you sewed into this moving story. Well done.
03/11/14
Awwww. Beautiful story, and well written...it pulled at my heart strings.

Lovely.

God bless~
03/12/14
Very interesting story and well told. A delight to read. Thanks for sharing.
03/13/14
Congratulations Leola!
GOd bless~
03/13/14
Oh wow! Great suspenseful writing. I loved the way you unfolded this love story. I could envision everything. Many congrats, Leola!
03/13/14
Congratulations! Win so deserved!
03/13/14
Congratulations Leola! A well deserved 2nd place win!
03/13/14
You had me on the edge of my seat wondering what the MC was going to do. The love this couple displayed shown through the whole story.

Congratulations on your 2nd place EC award. I always enjoy reading your stories.
03/19/14
Excellent. Never would have guessed it was parachuting. You timed the revelation just right. Congrats on a great EC!