The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/14
So good!

God bless~
02/23/14
Ooh, Powerful! You've depicted some raw emotion here and made every word count, nailing the topic superbly. A great ending too. Brilliant writing!
02/23/14
This is superb! Your line about surrendering not to circumstances but to God's sovereignty is really excellent.
02/23/14
Succinct and powerful.
02/23/14
Powerful stuff. I loved the nod to the blind man that Jesus healed.
02/25/14
oohh your line 'confined in a lonely embrace' reminded me I have chosen to be there too many times.
This prose was even more profound the second read through.
Congratulations on ranking 12th overall!