The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story puts together the down-and-outs. These are the people who Jesus spent most of His time saving. Thankfully there is a place where these people can go to to learn of Jesus' love. You brought them to that place in your story. Good work.
02/24/14
Well done in delivery and content. A superb story with a beautifully defined message.

Great work.


God bless~
02/25/14
You did a great job with descriptions and characterization as well as showing the one solution to the common overwhelming and destitute aspects of life...this piece had very good flow and a gentle hopeful ending.
02/27/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
02/27/14
Congratulations, Pauline. Good job. God bless!
03/01/14
Oh this is my favorite entry by far!
You did a wonderful job weaving these lives of desperation together and propelling them toward redemption.