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02/14/14
There's a lot of emotion here, and the contrasts in your MC's mood swing is so well-portrayed. If this is your story, God bless your new home and new step into the future.

02/18/14
Thank you for sharing this poignant, well written story.

It held a tone of authenticity, and the MC's brief moments of reverie in which she recalls her husband, pulled at my heartstrings. It was bittersweet, and yet so filled with promise as the LORd led the MC to the correct place at the right time.

He sees ahead and knows all things, I'm glad you surrendered to His will and found the new place in which you will dwell.

My condolences on the loss of your husband (if this is a true story) and my prayers are with you for peace and many years of happiness in your new place.

God bless~
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