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This is a fascinating story. I loved how the initial conflict drew me in immediately. Then the second and third conflict just added to the suspense. I would guess some might have trouble with the word spell, but I saw it more as a prayer. I liked how you showed the one character praying. Many people don't really know how to pray so I always enjoy a prayer in a story. You definitely touched on the topic. Just when things felt hopeless, there was the light at the end of the tunnel. Nice job.
Great descriptions - and you've got me wondering about the setting and time of this piece, and the healers and spells and such. Would love to see more!

Thanks for sharing.
Great story with impact and content. Powerful ending.

Nicely done!

God bless~
Like a scene from a sci-fi drama! Captivating read!
Congratulations on ranking 19 overall!
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