The Official Writing Challenge
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With in the word constraint you did admirably well!
But this parable/allegory needs chapters to really sing.
What a wonderful descriptive voice you have.
01/29/14
A fascinating and riveting piece.

Great job.

GOd bless~
01/29/14
Such a beautiful analogy of our Savior!

Splendidly written piece!

God bless~
01/30/14
Congrats!!!

God bless~
01/30/14
Masterfully crafted! Congratulations!!
02/06/14
A clever allegory with a profound message. Great piece of work!