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01/09/14
Wow, I loved this beginning to end! Chilling visual of what could be, but also a reminder that there is still hope, even in the last day. Great job, so well done!
01/10/14
I’d love to have your input into the free writing lessons available on the FaithWriters forums. This week’s lesson is on writing devotionals, and next week will cover writing on topic for the weekly challenge. Look for it at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67, or if you’re on Facebook, you can “like” Faithwriters Writing Lessons.
01/11/14
I enjoyed your well written and well done entry. Powerful ending.

God bless~
Wow, you had me from the first line. I found myself holding my breath and my heart beat faster with each word. There's not much else to say except for another wow. WOW!
Creative, Effective, Compelling and not preachy or dogmatic! Now that's an accomplishment when it comes to 'End Times' fiction. Great job.
01/15/14
Wow! I love your creativity with the setting and end-times era. Your interspersed "thoughts/voice of God" were powerful and effective. I could feel the tension and drama as the prophet searched. Excellent!
My heart leapt to my throat and anchored there as I read. Incredible picture of the End Times. My heart beat with the Prophet's thrilling heart. I was blessed with our Lord's strengthening and hearty reassurances.
My heart leapt to my throat and anchored there as I read. Incredible picture of the End Times. My heart beat with the Prophet's thrilling heart. I was blessed with our Lord's strengthening and hearty reassurances.
Congratulations on ranking 31 overall! Happy Dance! I'm so glad you're back!
01/17/14
Wow, this is excellent. Spine-chilling and so sad - until it reaches its end of triumph and hope. Just great to read. So lovely to have you back Patricia - have missed your writing!