The Official Writing Challenge
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I smiled in delicious understanding and laughed at the end!
01/09/14
This was a very enjoyable and delightful read. Thanks so much for sharing it!
01/09/14
Very humorous view of resolutions! I like how as the time to accomplish them dwindles down, they become more and more realistic. Such an enjoyable and fun read!
01/10/14
Most enjoyable! Those resolutions - I like the descent to realism. Well done!
01/10/14
HaHa. Loved this comical and creative piece. We've all been there. Good ending too.
01/10/14
I’d love to have your input into the free writing lessons available on the FaithWriters forums. This week’s lesson is on writing devotionals, and next week will cover writing on topic for the weekly challenge. Look for it at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67, or if you’re on Facebook, you can “like” Faithwriters Writing Lessons.
01/10/14
Although I could tell after the second stanza which way you were going, this was nevertheless a delightful read with a fitting title.

My take on this may not be as others. If you keep that "day's end" resolution, the first stanza just might come to pass. :-)
01/11/14
Adorable and fun. Thanks!

God bless~
Oh I love this. Your subtle sense of humor was a delightful reprieve of the thoughts that bombard me. I can so totally relate (far more than I'd prefer to admit). You nailed the topic in a fun, refreshing, and fresh way. Kudos on a job well done.
01/15/14
Love it—I can relate!
01/15/14
Very clever! I love how the mc's perspective changes with the change in immediacy of time. And I LOVE the very last line!
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