The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/13
Wow, I loved this story! You did a great job laying out the specifics of each character in a way I could easily picture each one. Your MC reminded me of the "Undercover Boss" show, though your ending was lots better. I could easily feel the frustration and sense of being overwhelmed in your MC. Glad for the maintenance man that the boss took his confidante's advice. Nice job.
10/31/13
I loved stories with hope and inspirational messages. This one delivered such an ending while holding my attention all the way through.

Nicely done.

God bless~
great ending. very real story with a very real message.