The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
Another story that kept me breathless.

You did an excellent with a very tough subject. The ending was "realistic" and wasn't sugar coated, and so it resonated truth. But, I would pray and hope that someone who is contemplating this "choice" would come to realize that conception is the beginning of a precious LIFE that the Lord has made...

This will get the judges attention for sure.

God bless~
08/24/13
Well done. A subject that is near and dear to many hearts and you handled it excellently.

Thanks for sharing it.
08/24/13
This certainly held my attention all the way through. I love the way you handled such a delicate subject, and a dilemma that many young people are facing these days. I agree with CD that this will do well with the judges. Great writing.
08/27/13
What a tremendously meaningful story! I'm sure this could could speak to people in many ways. Thanks for sharing.
08/27/13
Wow... very gripping!
08/28/13
You wrote a sensitive yet powerful story which I pray will reach across the web and save lives.
Congratulations on ranking 10 overall!