The Official Writing Challenge
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Well, that was the easiest bike ride I have ever been on… and so enjoyable! I am not a bit out of breath, though you’ve shone me some breathless views. And what a great message—who needs exotic when God paints masterpieces in our everyday surroundings; if we will just take the time to look! Really enjoyed this trip to Martha’s corner and back!
Unusual style of story... Very creative use of 2nd person. I also like your word pictures... Almost poetic prose at times. Well done enjoyable read
I enjoyed this so much, that I've read it four times now! Thanks for the journey...It was enlightening.

God bless~
Congratulations on placing 11th in your level and 18 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)