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This is a sweet story. I enjoyed the budding romance. For me personally, the details in the beginning drew out a tad too long. Once ghost boy was introduced the story picked up and I found myself immersed in the story. I did notice you spelled gross wrong, but I'm sure you've seen it by now too. I really like these characters and I could see this as a building block for a book for ten to twelve year olds. Nice job.
04/17/13
Fun kid story!
04/17/13
Splendid detail in this playfully delightful tale. Nicely told. I enjoyed it.

God bless~