The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. You did a nice job of covering the topic. The poem is beautiful and creative.
I liked the imagery here, but must confess, I had a hard time following.
You had me at "opal raindrops". I love this.
04/17/13
I loved this, it would make a great Praise and Worship song. Nicely done.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 13th in your level and 17 overall!
04/18/13
The parallels, the raindrops, God's creation of man and the garden of Eden, I especially like your description of man "brittle be the clay" and "mortal vessels, weakened, bereft yet of Grace" then your eloquence concerning God's remedy for man, "man and earth blessed by God's loneliness" "The Creator's Ache of Love sustained." Your message is profound wrapped in layers of symbolism and eloquent descriptions. Amazing!