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I found this to be a delightful read. Your described such beautiful and well maybe beautiful isn't the right word but vivid descriptions that I could almost smell the MC. You had me smiling throughout this delightful story and had me looking up a new vocabulary word which is always a wonderful thing to do. I will warn people, however, not to Google pulchritudinous charwoman together in one search because apparently it's a name of an adult game.I think you covered the topic in a fun and fresh way (giving fresh a literal meaning with the outhouse debacle) Loved it!
I meant to leave a tiny bit of red ink, but got so caught up with pulchritudinous charwoman that I forgot to mention that you meant the compliment with an I not an e. I hadn't realized there were two different compliments until a kind FW pointed it out to me, so now I'm grateful for that advice and like to pass it on. I still think you did an awesome job with this out of the box romance. :-)
04/12/13
WOW!!! What a tale you’ve told and what vision you’ve given the topic splash! You had me laughing out loud, some parts of this was so funny! An absolutely masterfully written, creatively woven, entertaining read! Plus, yep, I too learned a new word! Just outstanding, loved it!
04/13/13
This was laugh out loud funny!

I loved your wonderfully descriptive words!

I will have to remember the word pultritudinous for future writing forays.
04/15/13
Oh, my my! What a delightful tale! And to find religion because of his pranks was priceless! I love this entry. God bless!
Laugh out loud delicious! Your descriptions had me rivetted and I was sad to see the adventure end.
04/17/13
Hahahahahahaha! This was so good! I loved it.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 14th in your level and 21 overall!