The Official Writing Challenge
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I found this really fascinating. It took me a minute to figure out the white board but once I did I found myself smiling at the MC's righteous indignation. The ending has a great message. You did a great job.
03/14/13
Entertaining, charming, touching,filled with wisdom and a prolific message.

Loved it! Thanks.

God bless~
03/15/13
I love that verse, too. Clever and witty story.
“Oh yeah - I’m the slow one, I’m a real schmuck."

I love the animation and verve! However, I'm the slow schmuck here. At first I thought your MC a schoolboy,then an unhappy schoolteacher (big leap).

I love the wrap up, as I love the verse, but I do need help with my dudderheadedness. Your other comments reflect a more mature understanding than I have . . .