The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the message this story delivers. God really does use everyday things to sometimes make us pay attention. I could feel the suspense build as I read. I am glad that you added the part about how foolish it was to risk their lives over 50 dollars. However the message delivered was beautiful and it touched my heart.
Precious message in this clever and well writtne entry. It touched my heart.

God bless~
A great story! What a way to foil a robbery - a sharp pencil and a vacuum cleaner! Well done!
I loved this library caper.
Puts things in perspective! Most enjoyable and non-predictable read. To God be the glory!
Congratulations on your HC and ranking 16 overall!