The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the message this story delivers. God really does use everyday things to sometimes make us pay attention. I could feel the suspense build as I read. I am glad that you added the part about how foolish it was to risk their lives over 50 dollars. However the message delivered was beautiful and it touched my heart.
03/14/13
Precious message in this clever and well writtne entry. It touched my heart.

God bless~
03/15/13
A great story! What a way to foil a robbery - a sharp pencil and a vacuum cleaner! Well done!
03/15/13
I loved this library caper.
Puts things in perspective! Most enjoyable and non-predictable read. To God be the glory!
Congratulations on your HC and ranking 16 overall!